Wednesday 11 April 2012

Shaisen's Story

One day Tom and Emma asked their parents, “Mummy, daddy, can we go to the park, please?” Their parents told them, “You can go and have fun because it is a sunny day today.” When they went they played hide and seek. Tom wanted to count. Emma hid at the top of an apple tree. Emma saw an egg and called to her brother, “Tom, come and see what I have found!” Tom said, “Wow!” Tom and Emma were excited because they had never seen such an egg like that one. It was a big egg and it had spots on it too. Suddenly, the egg began to crack. They were very excited to see what was in the egg. In the egg there was a snake and it was green. Then the children went to their parents and told them all about their exciting and fascinating adventure.
Shaisen Muscat

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